Pretty solid! Only thing is the ending felt rushed. We never got to see their viral video!
Really if there was more context or even an inkling of plot this could go from "wrong" to "so wrong it's funny". But as it stands right now it's just wrong. Blegh.
My only qualm is the choice of typography. The san serif font you use in the first part isn't friendly enough, it just looks fat and clunky. But the second part is totally rad!
Thanks! I actually kind of feel the same way. I was sort of trying to get the hang of things up until about the time I switched fonts. At that point it wasn't about figuring out basics as much as it was having fun with trying different things.
I was going for a sort of wispy feel for the first part, which is why I didn't go with anything bold.
But I'm sure handphones didn't come that small in 1985 :P
I'm being anal, I know.
O_o didn't realize that
i'll fix it.
But I don't think the newgrounds loading bar is supposed to fade in and out throughout the flash, is it? Other than that, awesome job!
Thank you, I forgot to stop the loader after frame 1. Cheers!
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